Teardrops On My Guitar

I loved the song to this. Anyway, this was a good piece, but I still think a stronger word choice would make it EVEN better than it already is. Just my opinion. Feel free to ignore me. =)

I liked this one it kind of reminded me of a country song where the guy is always talking about his lost love. Beautiful title, it draws the reader in and makes them wonder. The only thing I wasn't a big fan of was the last stanza.. it seemed a little off, the last two lines I think should be changed slightly.. but other than that nice work.

"I knew you 'where' the one"
"Your eyes 'where' glistening"
"Our hearts 'where' mending,"
['were']

Joe, I really loved the title of this poem, it really caught my attention. I was a bit disappointed with the 'were' mistakes, but I really did enjoy this poem. It was such a beautiful piece. I think your love poems are quite amazing. Keep it up my friend.

I love the song to this, my favorite song...ever.

You did a pretty good job with this. honestly, I was expecting something a bit longer. But, I think it was perfect with that length. The emotions were a bit dull, I think. Though the point got across, I think you could of done a bit better.

I'm still giving you a 5/5 because it was a good poem.
keep it up, hun.
<3teria.

Very nice but
i didnt feel the connection I usually do reading some of your other poems and I dont know why but it was still good