Wow, beautiful poem. Loved all the lines.

So this was a great poem. i liked the rhythem of it. but there is something about it that made me think of something.. OH YEA YOU NOT TELLING ME THINGS!?!? haha :) i love you :P ttyl

- Belle

Wow.I really liked this poem. One of your best, I think. I can't relate to it, but the fact that you didnt say why made it easy to relate to, so I'm sure others can.

You did a wonderful job, once again.
Oh, I loved the title, and how it was used. :D
5/5

This was gorgeous.
I love the format that you used.
I love how you repated
The ending and the beginning.
It kind of, to me, shows the
Beginning of the ending.
Well job, sport :p