Your forgiven dave, no harm done

Hey David

sorry you had such a bad day at school. This is a great poem to say how sorry to your friend. I hope he does forgive you for what happened today. Well great poem 5/5

Kalee

Oh wow, i hope you can make up with your friend, it sounds like he was really important to you... and you really showed it very well in this poem...5/5
gabriella

Hey!..Beautiful poem!..great way to apologise to ur frend!!!...it's just wonderfully penned....kp writing!
Tk care n God bless
xxPoojaxx

PS: I hope things r better btw u guys nw..try to make it wth..he seems to be very important 4 u...

Omg!! David this is beautiful! Absolutly Beautiful!! I loved every part of it your so extremly talented! Wow!! blew me away once again when I thought it could never be done...

David
this is really sad. I can feel your pain in the words you have penned. Hope your friend and you work things out.

Gah James I'm so sorry
I am crying within, no matter what I say now
CAN NOT describe my hurt and dread
Please forgive me, somehow...

This stanza says it all.
Take Care Cindy

This was so sad ,and yet so beautifully written.If the friendship you have is true then I am sure your friend will see why what happened did happen ,for if he is a friend he will know you like no other and its a true friendship that can forgive and gain strength not just in good times but bad times too ,because a true friend is there no matter what.

Oh thats so sweet of you to write this for your friend [[= you relee are a good friend and i am sure that he knows that and he will forgive you E>
Carissa

Txeee, this is really sad...you made me actually cry...
beautifully written though...
5/5

*isabel*

Your words of wisdom
To open my eyes from my blindness......i like this part and also this poem makes you think....5/5

So sad, yet such a sweet thought to aplogize with rhyming words. straight from the heart. i am soory you had a bad day, and I hope thinks only get better, and that your friend forgives you. THe flow was grand, the word choice wonderful, and the structure was great. 5/5 one more time.