I know how it feel when a love just happens,lol.
another great one with full of beauty.
keep it up like always.

I liked the title, because love to me, is usually unexpected!.. Good work!

This is a great poem of feeling!

Nice poem. The flow needs a little work though and I did see a few errors. Other then that it was great. 4/5

Good Poem.. Shows lots of feeling and emotion.. keep up the great work!.. 5/5

To me...
They seem kind of emotionless, I have to say.
I don't mean to hurt your feelings.
I just feel like you're still trying
To understand love
And you were just a bit too excited about it.
But I can't feel anything from this.
But everything else is great.
I'll give you a 4/5 :]

The emotions weren't that emotional, eh. But, it was a good poem.

Very lovely poem! I know the feeling, and it just touched me. Great job!

I thought there could have been more depth and emotion in this.
However, apart from that I enjoyed the flow and imagery and I liked the way you wrapped it up at the end.

Hi kabs, musta na,
ur in love eh...oii
keep on writing on what u feel and like kabs..
god bless!

Great poem!!.beautifully expressed!!.......very lovely poem..i knw hw it feels...love ur poem...tc
xxPoojaxx

Cute, sweet poem you have written hear. I found the emotions to be strong and expressed greatly. Beautiful piece. Well done~mel

Eh the flow was slightly off to me, but then again that could be just be how I was reading it. The emtions could have been stronger, maybe presented more powerfully, but other than that its a good read 4/5

Nice sweet poem, I don't write love poems and rarely read them but this did hold my attention. The expression and feeling were evident throughout. 5/5 well done

Wow its awsome. i loved you poem. great work.. it relates to me

I dont read love poems often but when i do there usually really emotional reads. This one did have a little bit fo emotion in it... but ive read better poems with more emotion in them. I dont know... try describing the feelings more. The hryme scheme was kinda off for me. I mean you didnt have a real one going on. When reading the first stanza i expected the entire poem to have rhyming couplets in them. But they didnt. The flow also could of been better but it wasnt bad. The reptition of "Unexpected" did work though. Extended the point. Keep writing, and i apologise if this ocmment sounded harsh. xx

Hah
I know how this feels
Dont you love the unexpected
This poem could use a tad bit more imagery
or similes or just something
but the story line was great

Yehh i can realt my gf i dident even know she agsisted till now and i love her so much...sorry for gogin of topice butt yeh greatr job

I didnt really feel the emotions in this poem as i did in the other 2 of yours i read, i think if you described your feelings more it would be a great little piece of poetry. None the less it was sweet. Enjoyed it alot~mel

You really like to write short poems do you XD anyway It was short but straight to the point. good job and "Love moves in mysterious ways" I enjoyed reading this one! keep it writing! :)