by Katie Apr 30, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I cried tonight |
by sibyllene
My favorite part of this poem was "I cried tonight, just for you," as if it was a gift, your crying. I liked that - ironic and interesting. Did you intend to lengthen the lines as the poem went on? The first ones were very short, but they got bigger. Kind of threw off my reading-rhythm, but it would be an interesting device if it were intentional. |