The Soulders Grave

by sirus   Apr 30, 2007


As I stand on the Solders grave all the memories of me and daddy soon fade away

I wish My daddy didn't die, I wish my daddy didn't die for one big lie

Now it is just me and Mommy by our self alone, no more daddy too give us hope

and as I stand on the solders gave, I pray that all the moms dads aunts uncles come home too stay

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  • 17 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Aww. i feel sorry for your dad but hey at least you have your mom, some people have no dad nor mom so be happy ^_^. also you have us so don't be sad..nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren

    Nice poem. Usually I think that short poem's arent very good at getting a point across but yours did. Keep it up
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by elli_unleashed

    Sad poem but wonderful! ps everyone has a special word for their parents. i know how you feel too. if dad did die in war, then at least he died in honor and dignity unlike my dad, who commited suicide 2 months ago. so sorry, but keep writing.
    -elli, overandout

  • 17 years ago

    by xoOrdinaryGirlox

    This is a good start. :) I will be reading mor of your poems =)

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