This is a good start. :) I will be reading mor of your poems =)

Sad poem but wonderful! ps everyone has a special word for their parents. i know how you feel too. if dad did die in war, then at least he died in honor and dignity unlike my dad, who commited suicide 2 months ago. so sorry, but keep writing.
-elli, overandout

Nice poem. Usually I think that short poem's arent very good at getting a point across but yours did. Keep it up
xxx

Aww. i feel sorry for your dad but hey at least you have your mom, some people have no dad nor mom so be happy ^_^. also you have us so don't be sad..nice poem