LovingYou.<3.

by x l0v3 y0u x   Apr 30, 2007


When you walked into my life i knew from the start you were the one i wanted to be with for eternity.

For every second i spent with you would be a moment i treasured.

When time stands still i want to be holding your hand. In your arms forever is where i belong.

Sitting there listening to your heart beat as if it were a song.

Over and and over again i would think of the day we met. when time stood still for the very first time.

I knew you were mine from the begging never to look for that special one again, i had found you there and then.

Words Cant Describe the feelings i have for you.

I will love you till the end. No matter what happens.

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  • 17 years ago

    by bacha

    I loved it girl:):)

    its a vrey great one:):)

    keep up the gud work:):)

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    I think that for the content, this is a very good write. I do have some critique for it though; just to help you improve some more. =]
    If you structured this, breaking the lines, then the sentances up into organized stanza's this would be much easier to read and flow a lot better. The title isn't really suitable. I mean, obviously you love this person, but there is something more appealing to have than that. Look through your poem and pick out words that catch your eye. Even for this, "Words Can't Describe", or "No Matter What" would work very well. You said this in your poem as well.
    For what this is though, it is a very nice poem. You expressed your emotions well and used some good vocab.
    Well done on this. =]

    Tammie

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