I think that for the content, this is a very good write. I do have some critique for it though; just to help you improve some more. =]
If you structured this, breaking the lines, then the sentances up into organized stanza's this would be much easier to read and flow a lot better. The title isn't really suitable. I mean, obviously you love this person, but there is something more appealing to have than that. Look through your poem and pick out words that catch your eye. Even for this, "Words Can't Describe", or "No Matter What" would work very well. You said this in your poem as well.
For what this is though, it is a very nice poem. You expressed your emotions well and used some good vocab.
Well done on this. =]

Tammie

I loved it girl:):)

its a vrey great one:):)

keep up the gud work:):)