I think im gunna add u too one of my fav writers lol ur an amazing poet... chek out sum of mine it wud mean alot... xx
~shell~

U and me both

That was really nice piece of work...i like the way u expressed ur emotions.

Good job!!

God bless u

Excellent poem, very well written great flow, and wording was great, depression is something everyone needs to look at more and stop trying to avoid, so many people cutting them selfs, call there self easing the pain, excuse me but thats causing pain, any way, great poem , you did a wonderful job getting your word out , thanks for sharing, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

I really liked the ending. In a way, it spoke of positivity, maybe hopefulness. The emotion was clear, and strong. An enjoyable read.

This really shows your feelings you could tell you needed to let it out! the flow was great and some good rhymes! keep it up

It seems as if you pour your heart and soul out into each poem you write. I think that's wonderful.
Poetry can be a great form of therapy in a way. (not saying that you need it lol) Just saying your stuff seems to come from within. Which, by the way, makes for a wonderful write. 5/5

marcella

This was an amazing write, you used such stron words and it was full of emotion! 5/5

This was an amazing poem.. its so powerful, nd heartfelt, i can relate to this poem; how life is hard sometimes, and you think you can handle it but then the smallest thing tips you over the edge. The flow was good throughout your peice, and it was simple yet effective. a great write!
5/5
xxx

(Nieve) I absolutely love that word, to me it is really strong and you pulled if off nicely. The word choice was quite simple in some places but still effective and the flow was almost chant like which made it really easy to read. To me this piece was really capturing to me as if you put your heart into it. Overall a 5/5 from me. A really good effort, keep up the good work. ~mel

Great poem. So emotional and the rhyming was not forced and the flow wasn't arkward at all. Not too long and to the point. 5/5
Do you not understand?
I can't do this on my own
I need someone's help
I'm tired of feeling alone
Fave stanza ^^^^^^^^

~ Lainey

I'm sure many people can relate to this poem. A good amount of teenagers these days are depressed. Just know you aren't alone. Good flow, might want to make your vocab more advanced.

I really like this one. It had a great flow and great lyrics. Keep it up.

Nice poem...ggreat rhyming...^_^ 5/5

This is a good poem.. But i dont really like the suicide type poems.. but your writing was really good.. Great Job.. 5/5

I just need to accept the fact
Depression is the way of my life
I need to become stronger
Without picking up that knife

favorite pharse
good poem work on flow/tempo

:) hooray! hope!

A very good poem it was filled with so much emotion and the rhythm was flawless.

Uhm ok..ill always encounter same words..try to make it more new to the eye..wel its just me..5/5 for it