This is amazing! it flowed so perfectly and very good use of words. theres a lot of good meaning in this poem. keep up the great writing!

Totallyy enjoyyable. YOU ARE AMAZING!! Goo SSOT!!!

Very inspirational! It seemed to flow changing emotions along the way and then winding up with a moral in the end. Good Job!

I like the last stanza coz i know it was so true,, and i know everyone has their own choice and for me if i have to choose, i go for what's best! but its not so easy to decide..well u really have a great imagination and i admire how u used ur talent.. for me i love to read poem about life coz most of the time it helps me to realize some mistakes that i have made into my self.. and im glad i had found this very inspiring poems... great one!

That was amazing. It really was. There was so much truth invovled..well done on an awesome poem. Xx Chrissie

Awesome poem.... 5/5...check out mine

5/5 i think this is an excellent poem. i like how you did your comparisons and was nicely summed up in the end. I like how its also very true. I dont see anything i didnt like about the poem. Its direct and honest. Its an excellent write. :)

Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....

Wow. eyeopener. Lots of thought put into this, and it's the truth. Maybe I'll even start to make some better choices in my own life... God knows it's about time.

Your point comes across very well int his poem. It's sad yet so very true. I really like it.

~Ashley

I really like this poem because it is very straight forward. Not everyone makes the right choice but i'm sure as soon as they read this poem, they will not be lead astray.

I really felt attracted to this poem.

Then there is the people
Hidden in a world of pain
No one there to help them
Left to go insane.

^^ That was my favorite stanza.

The flow was great. And I really liked how you did one person as being hurt, then the other stanza as someone that's helping out. Great job! 5/5

I really like this, especially the th and 8th stanza, it is a really good comparison of people! x x x

Its realy good.

WOW. Superb piece. It is very true. It is sad and great in the same time. Last stanza is excellent.
Well done. 5/5

W0W THiS iS G00D
Y0U WRiTE VERY WELL
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-MiCHELLE
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