The Pit

by Kitty Kat   Apr 30, 2007


I fell in a pit
Something or someone put me in it

I don't know how to get out of the pit
The life inside of me is trying to exit

Exit out of my body
Because my body doesn't know how to deal with the stress

My body is trying to compress the pain
I'm just going insane

How do I get out of this pit?
My mind is trying to deposit

Deposit the worry
Deposit the pain

I don't know how it all became
Became a problem for everyone

But since I'm in the pit
There's nothing I can do for it

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  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    That was good but you might be able to replace or describe pit, it would make it better well thats my opinion, liked your poem maybe u can read one of mine.