Comments : My Broken Heart

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was great, your getting better, definately a poem, it had heart and a voice very nice just a little transition and it would be perfect. I give it a 4.5 so round it up a 5

  • 17 years ago

    by repair her heart

    Good job!! i really like how the poem was easy to understand but at the same time it wasnt boring. it kept me interested. it was sad though something like that happened to me :(