This is a bit different, the feelings aren't... but I don't think I've ever seen someone write it down. You did a great job with it! The flow was a bit shaky here and there, but nothing that messes the poem up. The rhyming was good, along with the feelings given.
You did a great job with it.
-Teria.

Strong until the ending stanza, I do believe. But, that was not bad anyways.

I loved the odd syllables and the rhming; the message was strong and beautiful as well.

The only thing I can complain about is punctuation; I complain about it to everyone, though, so no worries. It just really helps the flow. =]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

THis poem had a great flow to it. But it's not as good as your other one "Meet Your Master" but close. Again speechless! 5/5

So scary and you really created an image
Flow keeps you going and the topic was eliminated
Well done
Laura