I didn't quite get the poem, well..I did, but the words all seemed jumbled, it was hard for me to keep reading. BUT, the message given is true, and the last stanza made up for that. It was an okay poem, not you best.. But, I still think it was good.
Keep it up, hun.
<3Teria.

I think that this isnt your best poem but it seems as if you tried a new style using long lines and i give u a well done for that. The story was deep and meaningful enjoyable to read. Good effort was put into this peice of poetry. ~mel

You're really up to current problems with your poems
And it's a really good thing
My fave lines should be,

Cracks in their marriage, cracks in the love
Blind their eyes from the feelings they once endured
They never knew that "Business" would be such fun
And without their partners knowing, they're left assured

Beatifully penned,
Laura