by ImNotPerfect20 Apr 30, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
You were my friend, you were always there |
by Lozbi
I hate the thought of lost friendships and friends who move away. especially if that one person made ur life so much more liveable. great work, love the flow and all. |
by Boy
It was sweet poem. lovely take care 5/5 |
by BreeAnna
I can relate to this poem. I know how it feels to lose someone that you once called your best friend. My best friend since 7th grade moved to another city to go to college and she kinda got mixed up in the wrong crown I dont hang out with her that much anymore but we have talked and we know that we will be friends for a life time. I hope you find your friend again. good poem. |
This is a very heartfelt poem. I know you said to not comment on the flow, but this one isn't very flowy and kind of hard to read but the message behind it is good. That you miss your friend and you want to hand out. Hopefully you get to see your friend again. |
by Live WeLL
Awww.. nicee poem.. the rhyme scheme was a little off but that's ok. I still enjoyed it.. and hell yeaa to nsync!.they were the best haha... but anyway great poem.. you have a nice style of writing.. keep it up =] |