To Not Be Friends?

by XSugarSexSuicideX   Apr 30, 2007


Did I do something to offend,
Or will we just choose not to be friends?
I understand I did something,
But I thought this was a trivial thing.
Please rant, and do explain,
Because my tears fall just like rain.

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  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Not to be friends? (sounds better like this: to not be friends?)

    Please, rant, and do explain, = Please rant; and do explain,

    Because my tears are falling like a thunderstorm's rain. = Because my tears fall just like rain...

    This poem is pretty good. Short and i think you could have made it much better by making it longer. You did do a good job however with the syllabication, but still you need to find a rythm...

    Good job, keep penning
    5/5
    ~Stephen White

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