by Crystal Gaze Apr 30, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
The Rainbow Pack is my home now, |
by Startle Me
This really doesn't speak to me. |
by Faded
The flow was ok, it could have been better with differnt use of words. but the message it sent was clear and a good choice to write about. ur word choice helped make it a great poem also, gj, keep it up |
I like this.. it was awsome to read.. great flow.. and just all around good poem. keep up the good work! |
by Greg Beam
This is cool. very interesting topic. good flow and good use of words. very fun to read. keep up the great writing! |