This is cool. very interesting topic. good flow and good use of words. very fun to read. keep up the great writing!

I like this.. it was awsome to read.. great flow.. and just all around good poem. keep up the good work!

The flow was ok, it could have been better with differnt use of words. but the message it sent was clear and a good choice to write about. ur word choice helped make it a great poem also, gj, keep it up

This really doesn't speak to me.
I'm really sorry to say.
I just don't find it that interesting.
Sorry :[
4/5?