Losing control

by Valiantpenguin   Apr 30, 2007


Her fists are flying
her opponent on the ground
more blood with each swing
it wont be long now
he grabs her from behind
pulls her screaming form into him
the one time she loses control
it's over jealousy, how lame
the other girls are crying
the teachers are freaking out
the ambulance is coming
her eyes are filled with doubt
the girl isn't breathing easily
the boy is getting weak
if she doesn't live...
it's better not to think
they pull out and oxygen tank
she'll be just fine they said
the boy sighs a heavy sigh, "i can't believe that skank"
she meets her mom in the office
she's suspended for a week
her mom asks who threw the first punch
it was all her, not me
her boyfriend isn't happy
someone else who hates her, thats fine
her father shakes his finger
and yells "you've crossed the line"
she yells back at him
it goes on for about a minute
he slaps her across the face
"you've gone way past your limit"
her mother gets up and beats her dad
his title will win him nothing
the other cops come in and take him down
they leave the room
all puffing
at home she runs into her room
no one will bother her there
she pulls out her blade
and goes for the vain
she wont be life's maid
and not a minute too soon
the boy calls to see how she is
but she wont answer the phone
its slightly hard to talk at all
when you have a gaping hole in you throat

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  • 17 years ago

    by just me

    Very sad and the ending very surprising....left me in awe....i like surprise endings....:)
    <3
    L.C

  • 17 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Wow....

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