by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life Apr 30, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
The blood in my veins |
by Yazdan
That is amazing. I love this poem. There are a couple of lines that seem a little out of place but overall its AMAZING. Words like chocolaty are a bit awquard sounding and don't work too well in poems unless you're willy wonka or something lol. I love this poem. Simply amazing |