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by brianna   Apr 30, 2007


The joke is on you now
do you feel better?
do you know you once held the world in your hands?
you're lame
without dispair
yeah sure, I'll sit here,
and pretend like I actually care
with your words, you think you hurt me
you're only fooling yourself
because you think that will make you
better than everyone your age
try to see the way it is
you're stuck behind a cage
your personality makes you ugly
I'm not sorry to say this to you
you're just learning this now
but to all this isnt new
go cry yourself to sleep
because you cant deal with the pain
too bad you're just too weak
to find your own self gain
you see yourself as a gun range
let everyone take their shot
your pants are stained with guilt
because guilt is all you've got
you're useless and its tempting
to tear you down with my anger
sorry all this had to come to you
from the mouth of a stranger

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    If words could kill, he's be dead on that gun range...lol So delightful this was.

  • 17 years ago

    by mel

    'you see yourself as a gun range
    let everyone take their shot
    your pants are stained with guilt
    because guilt is all you've got'

    i really liked these lines!! well done keep up the good work
    mel

  • 17 years ago

    by mel

    'you see yourself as a gun range
    let everyone take their shot
    your pants are stained with guilt
    because guilt is all you've got'

    i really liked these lines!! well done keep up the good work
    mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good
    I liked the first one better
    but I really enjoyed this
    Great job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Another well written poem 5/5

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