by Kristina Apr 30, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
First you tell me you love me, |
I wasn't very fond of it. It seemed more like just thoughts going through your mind...which poems can be but this one I just wasn't that big on. 2. |
This ending was a ton better |
by Megan
Really good poem. i'm kinda in that situation now. keep writing!!! |
by Vanessa
It was a little on the short side, I thought for the length of it the emtion could have been a little stronger, but still a good write. As always you did a great job. 4/5 |
Short yet fufilling. i admire your ability to keep things simple and interesting at the same time. A skill taken for granted by most. 5/5 |