Pop

by carissalynn   May 1, 2007


Pretty Chromatic Bubbles
Glide uplifted, colors shining.
Then they all pop pop pop.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Aww, it was still a good poem!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    It was nicely written with some excellent vocab, but a haiku is a syllable count of 5,7,5.
    Sorry to be the bearer of bad news sweets
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason Rainey

    :)It made me chuckle. Are those good pops or bad pops?