Comments : Pop

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason Rainey

    :)It made me chuckle. Are those good pops or bad pops?

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    It was nicely written with some excellent vocab, but a haiku is a syllable count of 5,7,5.
    Sorry to be the bearer of bad news sweets
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Aww, it was still a good poem!!!