by Hidden Feelings within these Words May 1, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
1st verse. |
by Star
That was beautiful! You're so lucky! |
by Melpomene
This was cute and sweet. You must have a nice bf =) Very talented. It was interesting to read because the emotions were strong. Well done ~mel |
by Teria
I loved this. Let him know he's a WONDERFUL song writer. :D So is his gf. Lol. |
by Julienne
Lovely lovely song... um the first verse, right at the end the rhyming sounds a little forced, but i sang it out loud to my own tune and i love it... its awesome wording throughout the song and i especially loved the chorus, top job! 5/5 |
by Vanessa
I like that it shows how much emtion your boyfriend has in his heart for you. Good job. 4/5 |