Hey i really liked this one...it's sweet really sweet!!GREAT JOB

I like that it shows how much emtion your boyfriend has in his heart for you. Good job. 4/5

Lovely lovely song... um the first verse, right at the end the rhyming sounds a little forced, but i sang it out loud to my own tune and i love it... its awesome wording throughout the song and i especially loved the chorus, top job! 5/5

I loved this. Let him know he's a WONDERFUL song writer. :D So is his gf. Lol.
It was cute, and sweet. Which, I loved about it.

This was cute and sweet. You must have a nice bf =) Very talented. It was interesting to read because the emotions were strong. Well done ~mel

That was beautiful! You're so lucky!