Thid poem made me laugh. i love it! its great

-Manda

This is the best one I've read all night.. Great work!

What a great poem, it's really full of emotion and it's very clear and the words you use are so well put together. it all just flows :)

I love this poem it reminds me of sex wit my ex boyfriends passionate and rough all @ the same time

Beautiful..amazing.. the way u express this whole thing is just amazing.. it may sound dirty .. but it has so much in it.. you put so mucb love in to this.. gr8 piece of wrk..keep it up^^

This is good you have a very intrestin way of writing.....lol

Amazing. i enjoyed reading this poem it was really good..
i kinda thought u had a miss spell.. check this

The candles start to dim
As the day turns to night
We tired and restless
But filled with delight

should we be were? jus wonderin cause it threw me off a lil bit..
but 5/5