Hey this rocked. the title name that i thought of was "My feeling"

this was excellent. the love in it was evident. great first try at writing a song.

5/5 David

This is good.
I know once its finished it will be great.
Kudo's 5/5

[Sarah]

I think that it is great so far. I can't wait to read it again when you finnish it. 5/5

I thought this was really good.. once you finish it let me know.. 5/5

Im not gonna rate it since its not done yet :) I have a couple songs on here that are still being worked on so I know how it goes. message me whenever u finish it cause I would love to see how it turns out. keep it up

Gd start hun... u could think of a real cool name for it... good start love 5-5

First stanza was okay.
I guess it felt kind of cliched, though.
I shouldn't see you
But I can't look away.
I love that line :]
I don't think I should vote.
I want to read this when you finish.
And say.
Ahh.
This poem deserves a 5 :]