This poem was great because the flow was impeccable. Without the simple beat and the easy flowing style allow the reader to be carried along with the poem. Also I loved how the feeling seemed to electrify each stanza into a state of fever from which the reader couldn't escape. Great job. 5/5.

Wow, just wow. This was a fantastic write. I loved it. The flow and the rhyme was excellent. You have a lot of talent, keep it up.

Peace, Joe