by Seronum May 1, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Borrow me with woven eyes |
by mier
Wow! A truly captivating poem... Beautifully written with such intense emotion and amazing description/imagination... The flow of words is nicely written.. Great work! Definitely 5/5 from me... |
by Tricky Daze
It was showed emotions and truth |
by Alesia
Smashing work! I could really feel the pain in this poem. It was just so emotive. At times it lost a little flow, but it picked right back up. I loved the way you worded this poem most of all. Beautifully penned. Amazing job! |
by Chrissie
Amazing poem hun. You use alot of detail and that makes it more deep. 5/5 on this one. Keep it up. Xx Chrissie |