What Has Happened To You

by MaSkEdSoUl   May 1, 2007


I've got to escape
I've got to leave
I cant take no more
Of this agony

You push me around
Yell and scream
I hate what you've become
And what I've seen

You put me down
And make me cry
I believe it all
How gullible can I be?

You need to stop
For if you don't
I might just...disappear...

I've got to escape
I've got to leave
For if I don't
Death is upon me

***Not a great title. And towards the end wasn't all that great, but I thought I'd post it and see you what you have to say about it. If I have time I might try to sit down and see if I can fix it. Comment and rate please, I'd love to see what you have to say!!***

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    4th stanza....needs another line to make it even , flow is great though. hits home. great write :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I liked this spoem, It is full of emtions deep and strong. the last staza was my favorite part as well. Excellent write 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by becca

    I disagree with you saying the endings not good- it thought it was beautifully written and gave depth to the poem. the last stanza in particular is really powerful and well written. keep it up! xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was great transition could feel the pain. 5/5