by Andrew May 1, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I thought id try changing up my style on this one..let me know what yall think..thanks! |
by debbylyn
Interesting....I think you did a nice job on this. The only suggestion, get rid of some of the periods at the end of the lines...it slows down the flow a bit....I'm of the opinion except for a well placed comma or two this poem is fine with no punctuation. You do a good job of expressing your feelings and I like the uplifiting feel to the whole piece. All the best, Debbie |
HMmmmm its hard to criticize a good poem |