Wow this is really good great choice of words... 5/5

Simple yet clear. = simple and clear.

im = i'm (im is not a word, m'dear)

Although I am an Atheist, I have to give you Kudo's for standing up for what you believe and taking the time to write a poem about it. Not the best in flow, but I will give it a 5/5 for the heck of it.

Good job,
5/5
~Stephen White

This Poem is so good!
the way you put your words...
written as a poem, yet advicing people as well... haha you did a good job on this one!
keep it up!