I love how this poem ended on such a positive note, for a poem written on the spur of the moment i think you did an excellent job. With poems that have a repetition in them i seem to struggle making them sound good but you seemed to have no problem with it. Great write hun 5/5

Gem
Loved this poem. Letting go of things is such a hard thing to do but the way you ended this brings on a smile :)

Goodbye all the tears, the pain and the strife
And hello to the happiness of love and new life

Excellent job!
Take care Love your friend Cindy

Good job! 5/5 good poem!

I like this one so much. It means quite a lot to me for having uplifted me from my supposed-to-be-unknown sadness within. A real smiler poem indeed. :) It made me smile too!
Thank you for sharing. Love, Debbie

AWWE wow gem you have talent. This one made me happy and I am so happy that your becoming happier even if it is because marcus. great job as always. you deserve the best poem writer out there.
5/5
love you
chelsea

Wonderful.
Letting go of the past is a hard task for me & I'm still trying to accomplish it. A very inspirational poem!

"Goodbye all the tears, the pain and the strife
And hello to the happiness of love and new life"

^ My favorite lines. Wonderfully written, keep it up! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

"see no more" < any more.

I liked this poem, actually. When I seen all the 'goodbyes' I thought I'd hate it. But, it was quite amazing. I use to write these kinda poems.. like last year, they'd help me deal with things. I still do every now and then, makes you feel as if you really let a load off, eh.

You did a great job with this, and I wish you the best of luck with your 'new' life. :D
Keep it up, hun.
<3 Teria.

This was beautifully done.
The repetition used gives the poem a lot of impact, and the way it ended made me smile, I liked how it was so poisitive.
Flow was flawless throughout and the imagery used created vivid pictures.

I hope you're not saying goodbye to me!
=)
Good use of repetition honey
I love you
xxxx

Wonderful poem

"Goodbye all the tears, the pain and the strife
And hello to the happiness of love and new life"

Fave ^^.. always something great coming from you and always looking forward to reading your poems, keep it up and excellent job :)

Awww this is cute i like that way you ended the poem. 5/5

Wowp oems with repetition of the same word throughout normally sound really simple but you pulled it off lol keep writing :D

xxx alex xxx

Nice...all about the passages in life....hope the future is a bright one for you!

Wow i love your poem. i can see your loved.

good job.

Wow, great job! 5/5 I loved it.

~Lizzie~

Aww Gem. This was relee inpirational to me. I relee enjoyed it, as i do with all of yours. Write moree! i just love your work ( not like you havent heard me say that before)
EE>Carissa

Excellent poem, the repititive lines were good and it had a good flow and he ending was excellent, great job.

This poem was absolutly great. You make everything sound like it's going down hill. Then in the end you leave with a positive note. Well Done!!!!!!

This is a really nice poem i enjoy it very much.. its starts off kinda sad.. but then is happy in the end.. two thumbs up

Lol another amazing poem gem! your work is just so enjoyable to read!

Goodbye to Lady who is sorely missed
Goodbye to all the boys I have kissed
Goodbye to clothes that are too small for me
Goodbye to the past, and all it's debris

lol i love every word, but this part just stood oiut to me, great job

----tara