Faceless Guardian

by mier   May 1, 2007


Tear apart my soul,
tears frozen as ice.
Laugh at the crying ghoul,
swallowing your hollow lies.

Blinded by the mist,
the constant scream of silence.
Biting my bloody wrist,
the dreaded fear of defiance.

Living in my crimson shadow,
your existence is ignored.
My malefic needs you follow,
your stoned heart starts to rot.

Your death is in my hands,
smile at the fleeting salvation.
Bury your wounds in the sands,
you are my faceless guardian.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow!!! It is incredible, I like everything about this poem, you left me without words. This is one of the pieces that takes breath away. Beauty of your words is priceless... Very deep poem, original and truly dark. Well done, you wrote another masterpiece...

  • 17 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    You have a way with words, and that's awesome, but somehow I feel something's missing, sorry if I offend you or anything, I just think you're a much better poet than you portray, somehow you're not showing everything, I guess...if u know I mean...

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautifully written!....Good job!
    Kp writing!.....sure 5/5.
    Tk care
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Excellent job!
    =-)
    This poem is great and very well written!
    !!5/5!!