Excellent job!
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This poem is great and very well written!
!!5/5!!

Beautifully written!....Good job!
Kp writing!.....sure 5/5.
Tk care
xxPoojaxx

You have a way with words, and that's awesome, but somehow I feel something's missing, sorry if I offend you or anything, I just think you're a much better poet than you portray, somehow you're not showing everything, I guess...if u know I mean...

Wow!!! It is incredible, I like everything about this poem, you left me without words. This is one of the pieces that takes breath away. Beauty of your words is priceless... Very deep poem, original and truly dark. Well done, you wrote another masterpiece...