Illusion (is not a dream)

by NeferNoir   May 1, 2007


The sleepy mask,
opened it's hollow eyes.
The lone scarecrow,
bared it's broken fangs.
Awakened.
Threatened.

The mermaid screams,
as I burn her tail.
I won't weep,
if you leave again.
Pained.
Abandoned.

The thirteenth nightmare,
will steal your soul.
So when I wake up,
I am hollow.
Emptied.
Stolen.

The stars withered,
when I plundered the moon.
Open the skies,
I want to fly.
Cruel.
Evaded.

The night ended with screamings,
I cursed and prayed in confusion.
My world cease to exist.
Illusion.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Siglawoo

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    by Nix

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

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