Connect In The Deepest Way

by Jenni Marie   May 1, 2007


My whole body begins to tingle
Whenever you walk into the room
My eyes begin to sparkle
Knowing I'll be in your embrace so soon.

My heart begins to beat faster
Knowing that you're so close
My whole world lighting up
On your love I could overdose.

Desire courses through my veins
As I make my way to you
You're the one that I love the most
Do you have the slightest clue?

Smiling so seductively
As we become enwtwined
Praying silently to myself
That you always will be mine.

Making our way upstairs
To conect in the deepest way
Always and forever
My love for you will stay.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I read your profile, and you seem like one of the few decent people on here, so I really wanted to like your work. Unfortunately, I wasn't as blown away as I thought I'd be. I mean, don't get me wrong, this is a nice enough poem. I mean it's cute, it's homely and so very down to earth, all the while being told with flowing words, but something seemed to be missing. I'm not sure what exactly, maybe it's passion, but whatever it is, it was hard-hitting, and I felt it was missing.I'm sorry that I can't be of more help, and I'm also sorry if I seem harsh, but I do feel that the point of comments, are to tell the truth. Anyway, I will read more of your work, and I genuinely hope, that I like it.

    Brad

  • 17 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Ohhhhh. this makes me saddd. i relee loved it tho. just wonderful [=

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Oh that was so sweet and very inspiring worlds for me..and at the same time i can truly relate some of the lines... excellent5/5

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