Oh that was so sweet and very inspiring worlds for me..and at the same time i can truly relate some of the lines... excellent5/5

Ohhhhh. this makes me saddd. i relee loved it tho. just wonderful [=

I read your profile, and you seem like one of the few decent people on here, so I really wanted to like your work. Unfortunately, I wasn't as blown away as I thought I'd be. I mean, don't get me wrong, this is a nice enough poem. I mean it's cute, it's homely and so very down to earth, all the while being told with flowing words, but something seemed to be missing. I'm not sure what exactly, maybe it's passion, but whatever it is, it was hard-hitting, and I felt it was missing.I'm sorry that I can't be of more help, and I'm also sorry if I seem harsh, but I do feel that the point of comments, are to tell the truth. Anyway, I will read more of your work, and I genuinely hope, that I like it.

Brad