by Estefania May 1, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I was once your little princess. |
by reborn
Very good poem. sad one too. i liked how u made ur poem around the total contrast between the feelings ur dad had for u. i'll give u 5/5 but u should know that there are some typing mistakes that take away from your poem, so u should probably have a look |
I know how that feels, except it was my step dad not my dad, but it's the same feeling. You wrote it well. Well done. And thanks for the comment on my poem xx |
by shirwa
Man wat did u do wrong haha but yea this was interseting... nice good job |
by MaSkEdSoUl
Oh thats pretty sad. It had a good flow but there were words you didnt spell right, like: |