Robber

by RunningOnEmpty   May 1, 2007


Debbie looked inside the house
and made sure that no one was home.
She crawled in through the window
and she stood inside the house, alone.

She looked around in darkness,
peered in corners, on shelves, on desks.
What should she take first?
What things would her friends like the best?

She couldn't see in front of her,
so she turned on a light...
and there, right before her two eyes,
a human stood in fright...

"What the hell are you in here for?
Who are you? Do I know you?"
Debbie looked right at the man,
and booked it towards the door.

"Oh no you don't, lady."
He said, as he followed behind;
she had no clue where she was going...
Hoping the front door she'd find...

She heard him right behind her,
and she sped up, just a bit.
She ran right into the wall
and got up really quick.

She took a right, no reason,
she found herself inside a room,
blocked, no windows, no desk, no bed...
it was just an empty room.

The man was blocking the only escape,
and he started coming near.
Debbie crumpled to the floor
and screamed apologies.

He seemed to just ignore her...
or maybe didn't hear...
But still, he headed towards her,
inch by inch, Deb swept in fear.

He said, "What is your name, girl?"
She slowly whispered, "Debbie Allis"
Nodding, He turned on the lights,
and revealed, in his hand, a knife.

Debbie screamed, but his hand jetted
out to cover her mouth.

Silence.

She struggled, fought, twisted, turned,
but couldn't get away.
She tried to scream, she tried to bite,
but this man just would not give way.

And gently, he caressed her...
the knife stroked her thin, tan skin....
He beared down just a little harder
A cold, vivid, broken sensation.

Finally he broke the skin,
a drop of blood came out,
digging deeper, she would struggle
But she just could not get out.

He laughed
a mocking, cruel laugh,
he sliced her throat,
thru and clean.

"That's what she gets,"
he thought proudly,
"Trying to steal something from me."

Psycho poem! Lol. I hope that you enjoyed. It feels like something's missing... so, if you would help me find just WHAT is missing, that would be nice.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Run out of words

    Wow, cool poem. I must say, it's got a really cool imagination...unless its a reality..which would be kinda wierd...and freaky >.<...well I didn't think anything was missing I kindaliked it infact. Maybe you could talk more abt the guy who killed her. Coz its kinda like he's confused..
    "She couldn't see in front of her,
    so she turned on a light...
    and there, right before her two eyes,
    a human stood in fright..."
    so he's scared...but he's gonna kill her and be happy about it. Maybe you wanna introduce him like a sadistic wierdo..right? But I liked the poem though, and if you don't think anything is missing anymore I'd suggest you leave it the way it is:)