Comments : Broken & Shattered

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Very good job
    This poem had a nice flow to it
    =-)
    Keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rusheena

    I agree; I really like the similies and how dark it is. Nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by JustBeingDevine

    I love this...has great flow and is easily relatable....good job...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Nice work with great flow and great word choices.
    i like it. you are a talented poet. keep it up