The blue

by Anata   May 1, 2007


My toes touch the still water
Blue, cold and unforgiving
I'm drawn in
Feel how my body enters the zone between life and death
Floating, my mind is empty
My body, surrounded by the molecules of the blue
I feel my worries being washed away

Frozen I lay within
Embraced by the particles of the never ending
My mind clear
As if nothing matters
For just one moment
Peace lays it's arms upon me

Drops of deceitful water
Wake me up
I feel how life splashes the reality into my eyes
Expelled by the water
I'm back on the ground

My body trembles
Feeling how everything get's sucked back in
Clear view
Entangling thoughts
Open eyes to see the reality
I'm drawn back in

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Wow amazing poem! it left me breathless~! you have an amazing ability to write! i felt like i was in your poem, i was expriencing (lol i am a bad speller!) what you were in your poem~!!!----.:.tara.:.