Lol. I admire the sarcasm in this poem. It is flawless, besides the fact that it lacks grammar, but other than that it has... spunk. I like that. Great job m'dear... there's not that much else that I can say.....

5/5
~Stephen White

(sorry for the short comment =[)

It was okay. I love acrostic poems though, so yeah. But, the wording was good. :D

Well deary you should read the first poem i ever posted way back lol they sucked....you'll learn from reading poems and trying out new styles :) so keep trucking , thx for rrc my poem

I like it!!!=))

This actually is really well written lol. I hope you really dont think you write bad poetry if you do your madddd.

xxx alex xxx

Good job. the scrcaism is a nice touch. Your poems don't seem bad to me, you did a good job on this poem. 4/5

Wow lol youreally pulled that of lol, it was really good hun an i mean it i cant think of any major changes you need to look at xxx alex xxx

I think it kinda lacked ideas.
From reading the other comments I guess it was a sarcastic poem?
I couldnt see that.

The flow was alright.
Not forced but I think you could push it further.

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