Ninety Days

by Marc Ortiz   May 1, 2007


Its been more than three months.. Three lonely months
The day she last whispered I love you, M!
I am here alone trying to survive
No one is there when I needed them the most

Ninety days had passed since our great divide
I'm still longing for her smile in my dreams
Her sweet love for me already faded
There's nothing but hatred in her cold heart

Ninety days had passed since our great divide
I'm like a warm breeze she couldn't see me
I'm craving for her love in hell's prison
I'm here waiting until the heavens fall

Ninety days had passed since our great divide
Last night I had dreamt she has someone else
Someday that nightmare will be real..
... I've to accept the fact that she's gone..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    A very strong poem.
    Very emotional, very sad..
    Love can bring lots of happyness, but on the other side, it can hurt like hell..
    Hope you will be oke..
    You did a great job on this one.
    Take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    You are truly talented ^_^
    I like the repitition of "Ninety days had passed since our great divide" This sentence is just so strong, and you can feel that it's hard for you to go on.. you can feel your emotion in that line... and in the rest from the poem! =) Good job again Marc =]<3
    5/5
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    I got butterflys just like I CoZ This Pain did! Realy deep Marc

  • 17 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    This poem makes me want to cry because that is exactly how i felt when my ex broke up with me!! I felt like every day was just draggin on and on and it was just never ending pain..you just took the feeling out of my heart and wrote them down with beautiful words! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Sad heartfelt, and excellently penned. that was amazing. I like this one the best so far. the word choice was strong like the emtion, and the flow was great. no crtisim here. I think this one is perfect 5/5

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