by Marc Ortiz
Aww.. this is so sad I can really relate to this poem.. (my former love really hate me now..) anyway good job! straight to the point keep writing! TC |
by David
Ah this was a great poem. i loved how it like continued on from another poem. yeah its like that. you love them, then when you break up you hate em. thats life. |
Awesome poewm, great job, nicely written,you did a wonderful job on this piece, matbe we should compare notes , sounds like your life and mine are the same., thanks for sharing , your friend Tracy dean. 5/5 |