by Brittany C May 1, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
I really try to see the world through |
This feel is filled with truth and reality. I sooooooooooo loved it this has been my favourite so far. Well done xxx alex xxx |
I completely agree with you.. I loved the message throughout this whole poem.. just loved it becasue it was true.. and right now.. it just getting worse.. there isn't anything I would change.. srry.. good job and keep up the good work 5/5 |
by Startle Me
Wow. |
by Teria
Good job. A lot of good points made in it. :D I like that about it. And, the questions as well. |
by Darien
I like how you ended the poem with a rhetorical question, it gave it a very powerful effect. I think this poem would go under Life and Society. You are talking about saving the world and what people can do to help, afterall. Good job on this poem! |