Once again you have done it, another beautiful poem by jenna elphick,lol, i love the ending you used, you use such vivid imagery that it captures the reader, i mean it, this is absolutely perfection, love the flow, i give it a 5/5!!!

Ah well done. first of all i loved the title. that made me want to read it. and the ending of the poem was so strong.

And that Mockingbird bird, with tears in his brown eyes,
Still sat silently, waiting, from sunset to sunrise,
But in his old age, his final days were now gone -
And he had no audience there, for his final song.

ah gee. it was great. well done and keep writing. 5/5 always, David

I went ahead and did this poem instead of solemn flowers because it is in my contest...

Okay, I really liked this poem. It was sad, of course. I believe it has many meanings that could come from it, and I love poems like that. because, they're much easier to relate to. This poems flow was quite amazing, along with the rhyme scheme, and emotions portrayed.

You did a wonderful job; keep it up.
<3Teria.

This poem is awesome i loved it so much!!!!! i like the emotion that was put into this poem.