If you only knew

This poem was very well done i liked it

I like your poems and all but i'm running out of things to write because you write about the same topics.

your servant:
david

Who is this poem about. I would really like to know. Any ways, Nice write. Keep up the good work and follow your heart.
From your fav. Bro.
Aaron

I liked ur poem..ur a realli good rhymer..5/5
manda

This poem was very sweet and had a lot of emotion into it. My only critique is that you try not to force the rhyme. Lines can have any rhyme pattern they want to and not just once consistant stanza, just write from your heart.
<3Raych

thanks for commenting on my poem.